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Strange Powers (6/6) -Complete!-

Title: Strange Powers – Part Six
Genre: Romance, Comedy(?)
Characters: America, England, mentions of several others including an American citizen known only as Boomer
Pairing: America/England
Rating: very light R, for swears and heavily implied non-explicit sexual situations
Summary: America thought it would be funny to turn the device on himself. What’s the worst that could happen? Y’know, aside from accidentally falling in love with your friend.
This is my continuation of “America’s strange invention” from the end of Comic Diary 8.
Warnings: Pockets of headcanon, slight crackiness, sensual heresy, whoops, a few ‘twists’
This chapter: The decision. A curtain falls. You know the drill.
Part one, Part two, Part three, Part four, Part five

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lostdonut
Aug. 13th, 2010 04:16 am (UTC)
lol XD
"you moan with an accent" XDDD
Great story =3
metatronis
Aug. 13th, 2010 11:07 am (UTC)
Heee, thanks!
reppu
Aug. 13th, 2010 06:19 am (UTC)


I waited patiently for this fic to be finished. When I saw the original idea a while back, I had a feeling it would be good, but I know that I'm horrible about cliffhangers. So when you posted the final chapter today, I had to give it all a read. I'm SO glad you're a good author, because good grief, the idea itself was pure gold, and it needed a good person to run with it.

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic from start to finish. I especially like how you highlighted all the good times America and England had together, rather than solely focusing on all the bad tensions that still float between them. And though I got a slight dose of second-hand embarrassment at the ending, I enjoyed that as well. Plus, I will never forget that you taught me about Douglas Bubbletrousers. I don't think you realize how important this is. Seriously.

I have bookmarked this fic five ways to heaven, so when I go back to my Delicious page later, I'll be able to read it again (and again, and again probably). Thanks so much for writing it!
metatronis
Aug. 13th, 2010 11:47 am (UTC)
I can be evil with the cliffhangers, so it's probably a good thing you waited. ;D

Aw, I'm glad you liked that. Even with the love/hate relationship, there's still a lot of love! I think it's relevant to Anglo-American relations in real life too.
And the name Douglas Bubbletrousers will be known throughout this world, even if it kills me.

Thank you for reading!!
niamy_tak
Aug. 13th, 2010 09:26 am (UTC)
Yay, it's finally finished! I love how you blended together humour with really touching romance, it was adorable. I love that the gun didn't really work XD Just typical America stupidity =] And the ending was perfect. Germany being the only sensible one there was great.

"How could a former-empire have such slender hips?" I found this line hilarious XD It's good when writers don't forget they're nations.

I'm going to miss this a lot, I hope you write more stuff in the future. I'm totally adding this to my favourite stories ever list <3
metatronis
Aug. 13th, 2010 12:03 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much!! I really wanted end it on a sillier note, so I'm glad that worked. :D
luckytart
Aug. 13th, 2010 03:05 pm (UTC)
EEEEEE THE PHONE CALL <33

(I have been semi-stalking your journal, waiting for you to finish this, I am such a creeper D:)

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Please write more! :)
metatronis
Aug. 14th, 2010 11:12 am (UTC)
Heh, thank you! I'm flattered. :)
lovelycudy
Aug. 14th, 2010 02:02 am (UTC)
It took me to days to finish your fic, but good Lord, it was awesome! You got the characters' voices perfectly and the plot itself was delicious.

Loved it
metatronis
Aug. 14th, 2010 11:13 am (UTC)
Aah, thanks for the lovely compliments. And thank you for reading!
tomby56
Aug. 15th, 2010 10:34 pm (UTC)
Ah, a great ending to a great fic. <33 Loved this story so much, you're an excellent writer. Anything else you write, I'll be all over it.
metatronis
Aug. 16th, 2010 01:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
otoshigo
Aug. 17th, 2010 12:07 am (UTC)
8DDD That was just so full of squee that it cured my cold. XDDD Egads, the cure to the incurable cold virus???
metatronis
Aug. 17th, 2010 12:49 am (UTC)
Gadzooks! We must report this to Science immediately!

Fffff, glad I could help! :D
casdeansam
Aug. 17th, 2010 09:56 pm (UTC)
I read the whole 6 chapters just for one evening. I loved it. Each chapter was funny, sad, witty, very creative. Though I should confess I never watched this show except I read a lot about it and had a look at first episode, planing to watch. But I already have a set of favourite characters. Thank you for this wonderful story.
metatronis
Aug. 18th, 2010 06:03 am (UTC)
Wow, well thank you so much for reading!
sephydark
Aug. 19th, 2010 05:11 pm (UTC)
America has incredible powers of making things happen because he believes they will. Although I'm kind of relieved at that; it was worrying thinking that America's feelings might not be real.

It's rather cute and sad that England knew the truth but agreed to help America anyways. I am glad that he decided to be a bit more forceful with his feelings in the end, though.
metatronis
Aug. 21st, 2010 03:37 am (UTC)
I think America's will gets him through a lot, especially with all his crazy ideas. Oh America.

Thanks for reading!
marimo_blogger
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:01 am (UTC)
lovely fic! and I couldn't help but grin at all the references (Neil Gaiman! *wibbles* I love that story!)

now excuse me while I stalk you for some more... you're one fine writer.
metatronis
Nov. 10th, 2010 08:38 am (UTC)
Wow, thank you! XD (And yes, Neil is the best!)
ritoru_hoshi
Nov. 19th, 2010 03:57 am (UTC)
I don't remember if I commented on this already, but I read this story awhile ago and I just found it again because I wanted to save it so I could come back and read it all the time because I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BEING AN AMAZING GENIOUS!!! XDDDDDD LOVE IT!
metatronis
Nov. 19th, 2010 04:20 am (UTC)
Oh wow, well thank you so much!! XD
I really appreciate it! Thanks for reading. ♥
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marquis25
Feb. 2nd, 2011 04:12 am (UTC)
This is easily one of my most favorite Hetalia fanfictions ever. Thank you so much for writing this!
metatronis
Feb. 2nd, 2011 04:22 am (UTC)
Oh thank you! That means so much to me. ♥♥♥
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